Draft 1

It’s 3am. In the study, Daniel is currently using the computer. He is a 16 year old boy, slightly chubby because of “genetics” as they would call it. Usually, Daniel would be sleeping by now. But two days ago, his parents went off for a weeklong trip to Dubai. Daniel couldn’t pass of this opportunity to maximize his gaming time as he was falling behind his friends in terms of gaming experience. He was playing a game called F.E.A.R, a game of which most would say best played at night, in a cold room with a blanket over your head.
His dark brown eyes quickly dart across his monitor, his hands controlling his character based on what is happening on screen. Quickly, he moves his character inside the building. After taking out a guard with a grenade, he runs down the corridor. Suddenly, he found his character to be frozen, unable to move. The faded blue tiles in the corridor suddenly dislodge from the walls and flies out of the room through a door on the other side.
Daniel almost peed his pants when a girl suddenly came from that door on the other side of the room. A teen covered with blood and devilishly long hair which covered the face came floating inside the room. Daniel knows from the story in the game so far that this girl does not mean harm to him, but seeing her like that sure gave him the creeps. Pretty soon the girl whispers in his ear “” and floats through the floor, Daniel so far does not know what it means though.
“Enough for the night” he thought. He saved and exited from the game. He stood up, took his mug of finished Ribena and walked down the stairs into the kitchen.